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2011-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

학생이 쓴 원문

1. c 2. d 3. b 4. b 5. b After we had a class, I checked my grammar errors and then I made a phone call with my friend who has been studying the teacher appointment exam with me since four year ago. We started online studying again from today because we both had a temporary job right now and it needs some time to get used to it for both of us. This year I am only a person who passed the first and second test and he failed at the first test. The reason why he failed was that he was in a relationship with his girlfriends which made him miserable. He was so distracted by her. If I were in his situation, I would've done that too. Anyway, we started to study sitcom, Friends. First, we tlanslate it into Korean language that we nomally use in our lives, and then we try to recall the original English senteces from the translation. After that, we endeavor to remember whole episode without reading the translation seperately. It helped a lot for us to get the sense of English.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! It is good to know that you are trying different ways on how to learn more about the English language. That would take you far. Keep it up! See you in class later. -T.Sheela- Here are your corrections: 1.c >>B 2. d >>Correct! 3. b >>A 4. b >>A 5. b >>Correct!After we had a class, I checked my grammar errors and then I made a phone call with my friend who has been studying the teacher appointment exam with me since four year ago. >>After our class, I checked my grammar errors and then I called my friend, who studied the teacher appointment exam with me four years ago. We started online studying again from today because we both had a temporary job right now and it needs some time to get used to it for both of us. >>We started studying online again because we both have temporary jobs and we need some time to get used to it. This year I am only a person who passed the first and second test and he failed at the first test. >>This year, I passed the first and second test while he failed the first test. The reason why he failed was that he was in a relationship with his girlfriends which made him miserable. >>The reason why he failed is because he was in a relationship with his girlfriend and that made him miserable. He was so distracted by her. >>Correct! If I were in his situation, I would\'ve done that too. >>Correct!  Anyway, we started to study sitcom, Friends. >>Anyway, we started to study the sitcom. Friends. First, we tlanslate it into Korean language that we nomally use in our lives, and then we try to recall the original English senteces from the translation. >>First, we translate it in Korean and then we try to recall the English translation.  After that, we endeavor to remember whole episode without reading the translation seperately. >>After that, we endeavor to remember the whole episode without reading the translation. It helped a lot for us to get the sense of English. >>It helped us a lot to understand English.  

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