4th compostion..

as i'm getting a old, i sometimes wonder what is good or bad. when i was young, i believe that it's just the black or white side in our world. nowadays i just think there is no a parrent thing. we have to judge something in the view of the condition or situation one by one. these thinking makes me considerable about everything. and i try to see the origin of the social or private problem. i try to focus on what makes the problem and why someone do that. i'm not serious man. i just wanna write this kinds of my change viewing. ^^

[이름]^^ You are such a diligent student. You really write well now. Please check the sentences I have corrected for you. I hope you;ll have a nice day!   as i'm getting a old, i sometimes wonder what is good or bad. >>As I'm getting older, I sometimes wonder what is good or bad.  when i was young, i believe that it's just the black or white side in our world. >>When I was young, I believed that there was only the white and black side of the world.  nowadays i just think there is no a parrent thing. >>Nowadays, I think there is no apparent thing.  we have to judge something in the view of the condition or situation one by one. >>We have to judge soemthing depending on the conditions or situations.  these thinking makes me considerable about everything. >>This kind of thinking mkes me consider everything. and i try to see the origin of the social or private problem. >>I try to see the origin of the social or private problem.  i try to focus on what makes the problem and why someone do that. >>I try to focus on what causes the problem and why someone did that act.  i'm not serious man. >>I am not a serious man.  i just wanna write this kinds of my change viewing. ^^ >>I just want to write these kind of different views.