4th homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
[ESSAY]
How can proper greetings help improve relationships with other people?
( It\'s same on 2nd homework\'s topic, Maybe I didn\'t complete done yet before?)
If I usally use proper greetings to neighbor. When other people talk about me, I was very polite person.
It is very good method for make to improve relationships with neighbor.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ho!
Great job explaining how greetings can affect how people see you! I like that you connected being polite with improving relationships. Next time, you could give an example of a greeting you use with your neighbors to make your paragraph more vivid.
Also, I realize I accidentally gave the same homework as last time — I’m sorry about that! Thank you for completing it carefully again.
~Teacher Polly
If I usally use proper greetings to neighbor. When other people talk about me, I was very polite person.
>>If I usually use proper greetings with my neighbors, when other people talk about me, they would say I am a very polite person.
It is very good method for make to improve relationships with neighbor.
>>It is a very good method to improve relationships with neighbors.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.