4th Homework

This problem is very difficult to all humans. Humans want prosperously to live in their life. Also, Humans want to live in clean environment. But technological progresses and natural environments have a different characteristic. If the technological progresses are higher, the natural environments would be damaged. At the beginning of industrial revolution, people could not think of their environment because they want to be prosperous. But to progress in the technical area, there was a need, that is, the environmental cost. Although I work at the electronics company, I wonder that the technical progress would be made happy. Nowadays, the climate have been damaged because of ruin of natural environments. This season is now winter in Korea. But I felt spring rather than winter. It was very serious events. The temperature of winter have been always higher than previous year at every year. We have to seriously consider it. But until now, many people want to be rich than others.

Hi, [이름]! (^_^) How are you doing today? Thank you very much for writing in our composition board today. The development of science and technology has massively resulted to industrialization. Human progress now-a-days is measured in terms of industrial potentialities and prosperity. Industrialization has brought about a lot of advantages. Its growth has resulted in a large scale production of goods which could be bought at a cheaper price. It has also brought about time-saving techniques, more efficient labor and job opportunities to a lot of people. However, it is unfortunate that we\'ve overlooked the disadvantages it could possibly bring. The ecological imbalances and greenhouse effects brought about by industrial wastes and by-products have posed serious threat to human kind and its survival. Child labor, very high cost of living, inflation between the rich and the poor are some of the other problems that industrialization has caused. This was a very nice reflection [이름]. I hope that as we all struggle for a prosperous life, we won\'t forget our part in preserving mother nature. I hope you are having a great day. See you again tomorrow. ~Teacher C[이름] (^^.) This problem is very difficult to all humans. >> CORRECT! OR >> This is a very difficult problem to all  humans. Humans want prosperously to live in their life. >> Humans want prosperity all throughout their lives. Also, Humans want to live in clean environment. >> Humans want to live in a clean environment also. OR >> Humans want to live in a clean environment as well. But technological progresses and natural environments have a different characteristic. >> But technological progresses and our natural environment have different characteristics. If the technological progresses are higher, the natural environments would be damaged. >> If the technological progress increases, the natural environment would be damaged. At the beginning of industrial revolution, people could not think of their environment because they want to be prosperous. >> At the beginning of Industrial Revolution, people did not think of their environment because they wanted to be prosperous. But to progress in the technical area, there was a need, that is, the environmental cost.>> [DO YOU MEAN]: But as the progress in the technical area continued, they realized that the environmental cost has a big role to play. Although I work at the electronics company, I wonder that the technical progress would be made happy. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Although I work at the electronics company, I wonder if the technical progress has made us happy. Nowadays, the climate have been damaged because of ruin of natural environments. >> Nowadays, there\'s a drastic change in because of the damage made to our natural environment. This season is now winter in Korea. >> It\'s winter season in Korea now. But I felt spring rather than winter. >> But it feels more like it\'s spring rather than winter. It was very serious events. >> It was a very serious event. OR >> These were very serious events. The temperature of winter have been always higher than previous year at every year. >> The temperature on winter season gets higher and higher each year. We have to seriously consider it. >> CORRECT! OR >> We have to seriously do something about it. But until now, many people want to be rich than others. >> But until now, many people still prefer to be rich rather than save their own environment.