4TH HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
If i can do that i will buy the sofa.
One of my favorite hobby is lie on the sofa and watch TV when i lived with my parents.
But todays my house don't have a sofa.
So i want to buy that.
P.s Thank you always! Teacher or my friend Sharon!
강사 첨삭
Hi Elaine!
Thank you for your effort today!
I appreciate your composition.
Keep them coming!
Let\'s work hard on our lessons!
See you later!
~~ Teacher Sharon
If i can do that i will buy the sofa.
>> If I would have the opportunity, I will buy a sofa.
One of my favorite hobby is lie on the sofa and watch TV when i lived with my parents.
>> One of my favorite hobbies was lying on the sofa and watching TV when I was living with my parents.
But todays my house don\'t have a sofa.
>> However, my current house doesn\'t have a sofa.
So i want to buy that.
>> This is why I want to buy that.
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