5.02 homework

2019-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. learn from mistakes 2. just right for 3. to try a new way 4. achieving an aim 5. trying different methods 1. We usually used to learn from mistakes but it is important not to repeat again. 2. I catched a wonderful shirt while walking the street. It looked be just right for my cup of tea. 3. My cooking tends to be salty than i expected so, i need to try a new way : to put salt properly. 4. I planned an aim of one year. And it has been more trial and error like repeation of success or fail but i have to keep going to be straight for achieving an aim. 5. I have eaten ramen frequently from a child. Always same way in making made me feel tired so, i have tried different methods whenever i made it. I put some kimchi or egg or some onions. Most of all, raman with full of seafood like shell, shrimp and mussel is the best i ever had eaten.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.


 


Cheers!

Jean


1. learn from mistakes
2. just right for
3. to try a new way
4. achieving an aim
5. trying different methods

1. We usually used to learn from mistakes but it is important not to repeat again.

>> We usually learn from our mistakes, but it is important not to repeat them again.


 2. I catched a wonderful shirt while walking the street. It looked be just right for my cup of tea.

>> I saw a wonderful shirt while walking on the street. It looked to be just my cup of tea.


 3. My cooking tends to be salty than i expected so, i need to try a new way : to put salt properly.

>> My cooking tends to be salty than I expected so, I need to try a new way, and that is to add salt properly. 


 4. I planned an aim of one year. And it has been more trial and error like repeation of success or fail but i have to keep going to be straight for achieving an aim.

>> I have a one-year plan and everything has been more of a trial and error. It was somewhat like a repetition of success and failure, but I have to persevere to achieve my aim.


 5. I have eaten ramen frequently from a child. Always same way in making made me feel tired so, i have tried different methods whenever i made it. I put some kimchi or egg or some onions. Most of all, raman with full of seafood like shell, shrimp and mussel is the best i ever had eaten.

>> I have eaten ramen frequently since I was a child. I always ate ramen the same way that\'s why I got tired of it, which made me cook it in different ways. I put some kimchi, egg or some onions, but above all, a ramen with seafood, such as shell, shrimp, and mussel is the best I\'ve ever eaten.

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