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2016-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Hi. I submit my homework about today's topic. Conversation. I already exprienced this. My husband and I talk about a lot of things. My husband sometimes speaks to me angrily. He is not angry. His voice is very big. It makes me very angry too and I am in a bad mood. Qusetions 1. I have a cellular phone with a camera for a long time. So my cellular phone has many pictures about my family. 2. A few years ago, I have many pictures of my children. These days I don't take a picture because I am lazy.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름].  How is your day going on so far? Hope you are doing okay.
Thanks for the clarifications. And kindly check the corrections also below. See you again tomorrow. Enjoy the rest of the day! ^^


Always,

Kathrine ^^


Hi.
 I submit my homework about today\'s topic.
>> Hi! I am submitting my homework for today\'s topic.
Conversation.

 I already exprienced this.

>> correct!
 My husband and I talk about a lot of things.

>> correct! 
 My husband sometimes speaks to me angrily.

>> correct! 
 He is not angry.

>> correct! 
 His voice is very big.

>>  correct! 

>>or; He has a big voice.
 It makes me very angry too and I am in a bad mood.
>> 
correct! 
Qusetions
1. I have a cellular phone with a camera for a long time.

>> correct! 
 So my cellular phone has many pictures about my family.
>> So my cellular phone has many pictures of my family.
2. A few years ago, I have many pictures of my children.

>> correct! 
 These days I don\'t take a picture because I am lazy.

>> These days I don\'t take pictures because I am lazy.

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