5.1 H.W !

I want to be a Korean idol singer.

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As a matter of fact, I\'m not very good at singing.

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Usually, I thought it was very attractive to my age idol singer sing in front of many people with her great singing ability.

>> I usually think that it\'s very attractive that people my age are idol singers that sings in front of many people with her great singing ability. 

In Korea if i become a successful idol singer,

>> If I will become a successful idol singer,

I will can not only make a lot of money but i can also act as an actor in a drama or movie if i want to.

>> I will not only make a lot of money. But, I can also be an actress in a drama or movies if I want to.

And naturally i will look good and i will have to wear my favorite clothes.

>> And I will naturally want to look good and I will have to wear my favorite clothes.

Hello [이름]! ^^ awesome job on today\'s homework ^^ if you will become a famous idol singer kkkk I will be happy and proud that I was your teacher and you was my student kkkk ^^ I hope we both can achieve our dreams hmmm.. kkkk