5.1 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that it is important to good punishment.
Because when they are child, they don’t know the right things. They are only interested in win.
So they doing cheating. But we have to learn good rule.
So they can going right way.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for your homework, Ye [이름]!
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I think that it is important to good punishment.
>>I think that it is important to give a good punishment.
Because when they are child, they don’t know the right things.
>>Because if they are children, they don\'t know what\'s right from wrong.
They are only interested in win.
>>They are only interested in winning.
So they doing cheating.
>>That is why they cheat.
But we have to learn good rule.
>>But we have to learn a good rule.
So they can going right way.
>>So that they can do it in the right way.
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