5.1 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning! Wow! It is the first day of May. I hope that you have a good luck.
Homework
What would you do if you won $10 million.
10 million dollars? It is so much money to use for me. But if I have such a much money, I will make a donation half of the money for the poor people.
Secondly,I will buy a fancy house near sea in country. I want to live my rest life in the country. Lastly I really want to take a trip all over the world with my wife. If I get a chance, I would like to help poor children all around the world.
And I would like to give you some favor by giving lots of money,too. You are a good teacher for me. I would like to remember you for a long time.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! Happy new month! I also wish you good luck. All the best for us this month of May. Anyway, I gained a lot of insights while reading your essay. You are a generous man. You are always kind to the needy. I really hope that you could win $10 million so you could help a lot of poor people. I\'m glad that you are my student. Take care and have a fun day!
~KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good morning! Wow! It is the first day of May.
>> Correct.
I hope that you have a good luck.>> Correct.
>> I wish yo good luck!HomeworkWhat would you do if you won $10 million.10 million dollars?
>> Correct.
It is so much money to use for me. >> That amount of money is too much for me to use.
But if I have such a much money, I will make a donation half of the money for the poor people.
>> But if I have such an amount of money, I will donate half of it to poor people.Secondly,I will buy a fancy house near sea in country.
>> Secondly, I will buy a fancy house near a sea in the countryside.
I want to live my rest life in the country.
>> I want to live for the rest of my life in the country.
Lastly I really want to take a trip all over the world with my wife.
>> Correct.
>> Lastly, I really want to travel around the world with my wife.
If I get a chance, I would like to help poor children all around the world.
>> Correct.
And I would like to give you some favor by giving lots of money,too.
>> And I would like to give you lots of money,too.
You are a good teacher for me.
>>You are a good teacer to me.
I would like to remember you for a long time.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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