5.1 Homework

2014-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi ma'am! Good morning! Wow! It is the first day of May. I hope that you have a good luck. Homework What would you do if you won $10 million. 10 million dollars? It is so much money to use for me. But if I have such a much money, I will make a donation half of the money for the poor people. Secondly,I will buy a fancy house near sea in country. I want to live my rest life in the country. Lastly I really want to take a trip all over the world with my wife. If I get a chance, I would like to help poor children all around the world. And I would like to give you some favor by giving lots of money,too. You are a good teacher for me. I would like to remember you for a long time. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! Happy new month! I also wish you good luck. All the best for us this month of May. Anyway, I gained a lot of insights while reading your essay. You are a generous man. You are always kind to the needy. I really hope that you could win $10 million so you could help a lot of poor people. I\'m glad that you are my student. Take care and have a fun day! ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good morning! Wow! It is the first day of May. >> Correct. I hope that you have a good luck.>> Correct. >> I wish yo good luck!HomeworkWhat would you do if you won $10 million.10 million dollars? >> Correct. It is so much money to use for me. >> That amount of money is too much for me to use. But if I have such a much money, I will make a donation half of the money for the poor people. >> But if I have such an amount of money, I will donate half of it to poor people.Secondly,I will buy a fancy house near sea in country. >> Secondly, I will buy a fancy house near a sea in the countryside. I want to live my rest life in the country. >> I want to live for the rest of my life in the country. Lastly I really want to take a trip all over the world with my wife. >> Correct. >> Lastly, I really want to travel around the world with my wife. If I get a chance, I would like to help poor children all around the world. >> Correct. And I would like to give you some favor by giving lots of money,too. >> And I would like to give you lots of money,too. You are a good teacher for me. >>You are a good teacer to me. I would like to remember you for a long time. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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