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I would buy a dining table first in my future family house.
If it is the first house after getting married, we already have a bed and a dressing table.
The first house is a studio including all appliances such as a fridge, washing machine, and burner, and my husband is still living there.
We didn\'t need to buy any appliances since all necessary appliances were installed in the house.
However, we have to buy all furniture and appliances for a new house because it is a new house and there is no furniture.
At the same time as we move, we must buy a washing machine and a fridge first.
There are very essential appliances for basic life.
We have a lot of loans at the bank, so we don\'t have a lot of extra money on furniture and appliances.
Therefore, I will carefully buy the items I need one bu one.
I want to buy many cool furniture and appliances, because we have to use them for a long time.
So, I will buy one by one with care even if it will require a long time.
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Hi [이름],
I guess buying things for a new house really needs some time and good decision making skills especially if you are on a tight budget, so I totally understand your point. Anyway, this is a good response to your homework. Have a great weekend!
-Rachel
I would buy a dining table first in my future family house.
>> correct
If it is the first house after getting married, we already have a bed and a dressing table.
If it is the first house after getting married, we already have a bed and a dressing table.
>> It would be the first furniture to be bought because we already have a bed and a dresser.
The first house is a studio including all appliances such as a fridge, washing machine, and burner, and my husband is still living there.
The first house is a studio including all appliances such as a fridge, washing machine, and burner, and my husband is still living there.
>> correct
We didn\'t need to buy any appliances since all necessary appliances were installed in the house.
We didn\'t need to buy any appliances since all necessary appliances were installed in the house.
>> correct
>> It was not necessary to buy any appliance because all the necessary ones were already installed.
However, we have to buy all furniture and appliances for a new house because it is a new house and there is no furniture.
However, we have to buy all furniture and appliances for a new house because it is a new house and there is no furniture.
>> correct
At the same time as we move, we must buy a washing machine and a fridge first.
At the same time as we move, we must buy a washing machine and a fridge first.
>> correct
There are very essential appliances for basic life.
There are very essential appliances for basic life.
>> These are essential appliances for basic living.
We have a lot of loans at the bank, so we don\'t have a lot of extra money on furniture and appliances.
We have a lot of loans at the bank, so we don\'t have a lot of extra money on furniture and appliances.
>> We have a lot of loans from banks, so we don\'t have a lot of extra money for furniture and appliances.
Therefore, I will carefully buy the items I need to buy.
Therefore, I will carefully buy the items I need to buy.
>> correct
I want to buy many cool furniture and appliances, because we have to use them for a long time.
I want to buy many cool furniture and appliances, because we have to use them for a long time.
>> correct
So, I will buy one by one with care even if it will require a long time.
So, I will buy one by one with care even if it will require a long time.
>> So I will by one after another with care even if it will require a long time.
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