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[Should humans be allowed to use other animals as objects of sport and entertainment?]
It has to be prohibited as law.
I think the human is also an animal.
My mom has two dogs.
I really realized any animals have their own mind even if they can not conversate with a human after bringing two dogs.
My mom\'s two dogs cannot say with human, but, often we can feel what they want to do.
It\'s amazing.
Sometimes I feel the dogs are better than me for my mom.
They also feel the human\'s feeling or atmosphere, and sometimes they console us.
I really hate the person who takes lightly animals\' life.
They should feel the same situation by animals.
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Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Nice thoughts on this one. “Animals are such agreeable friends—they ask no questions; they pass no criticisms.” –George Eliot
-Teacher Jedah
It has to be prohibited as law.
>>It has to be passed as a law.
I think the human is also an animal.
I think the human is also an animal.
>>I think humans are also animals.
My mom has two dogs.
My mom has two dogs.
>>Correct
I really realized any animals have their own mind even if they can not conversate with a human after bringing two dogs.
I really realized any animals have their own mind even if they can not conversate with a human after bringing two dogs.
>>I realized after having two dogs, that animals have their own minds even if they can not talk/converse with us.
My mom\'s two dogs cannot say with human, but, often we can feel what they want to do.
My mom\'s two dogs cannot say with human, but, often we can feel what they want to do.
>>My mom\'s two dogs couldn\'t say what they want the way we speak, but we often understand and feel what they want.
It\'s amazing.
>>Correct
Sometimes I feel the dogs are better than me for my mom.
Sometimes I feel the dogs are better than me for my mom.
>>Correct
They also feel the human\'s feeling or atmosphere, and sometimes they console us.
They also feel the human\'s feeling or atmosphere, and sometimes they console us.
>>Correct
I really hate the person who takes lightly animals\' life.
I really hate the person who takes lightly animals\' life.
>>I really hate the person who takes animals lives for granted.
They should feel the same situation by animals.
They should feel the same situation by animals.
>>They should feel how animals feel too.
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