5.11 Homework

2015-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! We have another week again! Good luck! Why do you think many Chinese tourists are coming to Korea? These days, many Chinese tourists are coming to Korea. I think it is because the cost of travel to Korea is more inexpensive than other countries, and there is an advantage in distance between two countries. I also think that Chinese are greatly influenced by Korean drama and music. I think we have to try to be kind to every tourists, so they will be coming to Korea again. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello MR. [이름]! I hope that you are having a great Monday. Let\'s start the week right and smile  as you gree the new day. Thank you for sending this in. Please review my corrections. ^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct.We have another week again! Good luck! >> Correct.Why do you think many Chinese tourists are coming to Korea?These days, many Chinese tourists are coming to Korea. >> Correct. I think it is because the cost of travel to Korea is more inexpensive than other countries, and there is an advantage in distance between two countries. >> I think it is because the cost of travel to Korea is more inexpensive than other countries, and there is an advantage in distance between the two countries. I also think that Chinese are greatly influenced by Korean drama and music. >> Correct. I think we have to try to be kind to every tourists, so they will be coming to Korea again.>> I think we have to try to be kind to every tourist, so they will come to Korea again. >>I think we have to try to be kind to all tourists, so they will come to Korea again. Thank you! >> Correct.

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