5.11 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
We have another week again! Good luck!
Why do you think many Chinese tourists are coming to Korea?
These days, many Chinese tourists are coming to Korea. I think it is because the cost of travel to Korea is more inexpensive than other countries, and there is an advantage in distance between two countries. I also think that Chinese are greatly influenced by Korean drama and music. I think we have to try to be kind to every tourists, so they will be coming to Korea again.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello MR. [이름]!
I hope that you are having a great Monday. Let\'s start the week right and smile as you gree the new day.
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Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.We have another week again! Good luck!
>> Correct.Why do you think many Chinese tourists are coming to Korea?These days, many Chinese tourists are coming to Korea.
>> Correct.
I think it is because the cost of travel to Korea is more inexpensive than other countries, and there is an advantage in distance between two countries.
>> I think it is because the cost of travel to Korea is more inexpensive than other countries, and there is an advantage in distance between the two countries.
I also think that Chinese are greatly influenced by Korean drama and music.
>> Correct.
I think we have to try to be kind to every tourists, so they will be coming to Korea again.>> I think we have to try to be kind to every tourist, so they will come to Korea again.
>>I think we have to try to be kind to all tourists, so they will come to Korea again.
Thank you!
>> Correct.
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