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2018-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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[A song I usually listen to. How does it make me feel when I listen to it?] When I feel confusion or anger with working, I usually listen a piano music. I prefer the modern piano music than classic orchestra. The music make me relaxed. The most lazy time is about 3 pm. At that time, I turn on the piano music, wear earphones, close eyes, and meditate for 10 minute. This is best way to calm down that I found nowadays. If there is someone feel difficulty to relax, I strongly recommend meditation with soft music.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for the recommendation [이름]!

I want to try this some time.

See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,


[A song I usually listen to. How does it make me feel when I listen to it?]

When I feel confusion or anger with working, I usually listen a piano music. 

>>> When I am confused or I feel angry because of work, I usually listen to piano music.
 I prefer the modern piano music than classic orchestra.

>>> I prefer the modern piano music to classic orchestra.
 The music make me relaxed. 

>>> The music makes me relaxed.
 The most lazy time is about 3 pm. 

>>> The time I feel lazy most is 3 pm.
 At that time, I turn on the piano music, wear earphones, close eyes, and meditate for 10 minute. 

>>> At that time, I turn on the piano music, wear earphones, close my eyes and meditate for 10 minutes.
 This is best way to calm down that I found nowadays.

>>> This is the most recent way I found to calm myself.
 If there is someone feel difficulty to relax, I strongly recommend meditation with soft music.

>>> I recommend meditating with soft music to someone who has difficulty relaxing.

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