5/11 homework
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강사 첨삭
Thanks for the recommendation [이름]!
I want to try this some time.
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
[A song I usually listen to. How does it make me feel when I listen to it?]
When I feel confusion or anger with working, I usually listen a piano music.
>>> When I am confused or I feel angry because of work, I usually listen to piano music.
I prefer the modern piano music than classic orchestra.
>>> I prefer the modern piano music to classic orchestra.
The music make me relaxed.
>>> The music makes me relaxed.
The most lazy time is about 3 pm.
>>> The time I feel lazy most is 3 pm.
At that time, I turn on the piano music, wear earphones, close eyes, and meditate for 10 minute.
>>> At that time, I turn on the piano music, wear earphones, close my eyes and meditate for 10 minutes.
This is best way to calm down that I found nowadays.
>>> This is the most recent way I found to calm myself.
If there is someone feel difficulty to relax, I strongly recommend meditation with soft music.
>>> I recommend meditating with soft music to someone who has difficulty relaxing.
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