5-11th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Everybody likes to see the sports game, for example, baseball, soccer, basketball.
Everybody likes to do the sports game with friends on the playground.
Nowadays, the market of sport game become a very big size.
When we watch the sport game on a TV, we could not catch the flow of the money that is related with the sport game in order to broadcast it.
It is a good chance for a broadcaster to enable to get a lot of money.
So many people mistake that they would not pay the money for broadcasting directly.
And they also mistake that they don't pay the salary of professional players in the baseball, soccer or basketball.
Think about that, if we don't pay it, who pay it?
Whenever we watch the sport game on the TV, or whenever we see it on the ground, we always pay it for the professional players and the broadcasters.
Anyway, the season of the baseball is nearly over.
So, I'm very sad since I cannot see the game after working.
But I have another favorite sport that is the soccer.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! :)
How are you doing so far today?
Thanks for sharing something about sports.
Baseball and soccer are really the most famous sports in Korea.
I am not really familiar with them but I want to learn how to play them someday.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you tomorrow. ^_^
~Teacher C[이름]
Everybody likes to see the sports game, for example, baseball, soccer, basketball.
>> Everybody likes to see a sports game like baseball, soccer, or basketball.
Everybody likes to do the sports game with friends on the playground.
>> Everybody likes to play sports with friends on the playground.
Nowadays, the market of sport game become a very big size.
>> Nowadays, the market of sports has become very big.
When we watch the sport game on a TV, we could not catch the flow of the money that is related with the sport game in order to broadcast it.
>> [Do you mean]: When we watch a sports game on TV, we could not catch the flow of the money that is related with the sports game so we could not broadcast it.
It is a good chance for a broadcaster to enable to get a lot of money.
>> It is a good chance for a broadcaster to get a lot of money.
So many people mistake that they would not pay the money for broadcasting directly.
>> So many people think that they would not pay money for broadcasting it directly.
And they also mistake that they don\'t pay the salary of professional players in the baseball, soccer or basketball.
>> They also think that they won\'t pay for the salary of professional players in baseball, soccer or basketball.
Think about that, if we don\'t pay it, who pay it?
>> Think about it. If we don\'t pay it, who will pay it?
Whenever we watch the sport game on the TV, or whenever we see it on the ground, we always pay it for the professional players and the broadcasters.
>> Whenever we watch a sports game on TV or whenever we see it on the grounds, we always pay for the professional players and the broadcasters.
Anyway, the season of the baseball is nearly over.
>> Anyway, the baseball season is nearly over.
So, I\'m very sad since I cannot see the game after working.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> So, I\'m very sad since I cannot see the game after work.
But I have another favorite sport that is the soccer.
>> But I have another favorite sport and that is the soccer.
How are you doing so far today?
Thanks for sharing something about sports.
Baseball and soccer are really the most famous sports in Korea.
I am not really familiar with them but I want to learn how to play them someday.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you tomorrow. ^_^
~Teacher C[이름]
Everybody likes to see the sports game, for example, baseball, soccer, basketball.
>> Everybody likes to see a sports game like baseball, soccer, or basketball.
Everybody likes to do the sports game with friends on the playground.
>> Everybody likes to play sports with friends on the playground.
Nowadays, the market of sport game become a very big size.
>> Nowadays, the market of sports has become very big.
When we watch the sport game on a TV, we could not catch the flow of the money that is related with the sport game in order to broadcast it.
>> [Do you mean]: When we watch a sports game on TV, we could not catch the flow of the money that is related with the sports game so we could not broadcast it.
It is a good chance for a broadcaster to enable to get a lot of money.
>> It is a good chance for a broadcaster to get a lot of money.
So many people mistake that they would not pay the money for broadcasting directly.
>> So many people think that they would not pay money for broadcasting it directly.
And they also mistake that they don\'t pay the salary of professional players in the baseball, soccer or basketball.
>> They also think that they won\'t pay for the salary of professional players in baseball, soccer or basketball.
Think about that, if we don\'t pay it, who pay it?
>> Think about it. If we don\'t pay it, who will pay it?
Whenever we watch the sport game on the TV, or whenever we see it on the ground, we always pay it for the professional players and the broadcasters.
>> Whenever we watch a sports game on TV or whenever we see it on the grounds, we always pay for the professional players and the broadcasters.
Anyway, the season of the baseball is nearly over.
>> Anyway, the baseball season is nearly over.
So, I\'m very sad since I cannot see the game after working.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> So, I\'m very sad since I cannot see the game after work.
But I have another favorite sport that is the soccer.
>> But I have another favorite sport and that is the soccer.
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