5-12th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
We has felt a climate change over and over as time goes away.
In this summer, it was not hotter than last summer, I think.
The speed of coming winter is seemed to be slow.
The autumn in Korea has been longer than last year.
The temperature between summer and autumn was not dramatically changed, so I didn't hear that there were so many cold patients in some hospitals.
You know, if the dramatic change of the temperature would become a reason why people catch a cold.
It may be also the affect of the climate change.
Anyway, I didn't see the colorful leaves under trees or on the branches.
Last year, the maple was very beautiful like a fireworks.
Nowadays, the trees which had to be shown the colorful leaves didn't do that yet.
In the autumn season, many people go to a mountain that is famous for the maple by several buses.
Anyway, the dramatic change seems to be not good.
The predictable thing is always good for everyone since we could prepare something in future.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Happy Friday! ^_^
I agree that the sudden climate change is not good at all for us.
Just look at what\'s happening in the United States nowadays.
In some states, they are having deadly hurricanes and in other states, they are having detrimental forest fires.
That\'s what happens whey we abuse our environment.
Nature eventually takes its revenge.
We should continue taking care of mother nature.
Do you agree?
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you again on Tuesday. ^_^
~Teacher C[이름]
We has felt a climate change over and over as time goes away.
>> We experience climate change over and over as time goes away.
In this summer, it was not hotter than last summer, I think.
>> I think this year\'s summer was not as hot as the previous year\'s summer.
The speed of coming winter is seemed to be slow.
>> The speed of the coming winter seemed to be slow.
The autumn in Korea has been longer than last year.
>> The autumn in Korea is longer than last year.
The temperature between summer and autumn was not dramatically changed, so I didn\'t hear that there were so many cold patients in some hospitals.
>> [Do you mean]: The temperature difference between summer and autumn has not dramatically changed, so there are no news about the number of cold patients in some hospitals.
You know, if the dramatic change of the temperature would become a reason why people catch a cold.
>> You know that the dramatic change of temperature could become a reason why people catch a cold.
It may be also the affect of the climate change.
>> It may be also be the affect of climate change.
Anyway, I didn\'t see the colorful leaves under trees or on the branches.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Anyway, I hadn\'t seen the colorful leaves under trees or on the branches.
Last year, the maple was very beautiful like a fireworks.
>> Last year, the maple was very beautiful and it looked like fireworks.
Nowadays, the trees which had to be shown the colorful leaves didn\'t do that yet.
>> Nowadays, the trees which showed off colorful leaves haven\'t changed their colors yet.
In the autumn season, many people go to a mountain that is famous for the maple by several buses.
>> [Do you mean]: In the autumn season, many people go to a mountain using several buses to see the famous maple trees.
Anyway, the dramatic change seems to be not good.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Anyway, the dramatic change doesn\'t seems to be good.
The predictable thing is always good for everyone since we could prepare something in future.
>> The predictable thing is always good for everyone since we could prepare something in the future.
Happy Friday! ^_^
I agree that the sudden climate change is not good at all for us.
Just look at what\'s happening in the United States nowadays.
In some states, they are having deadly hurricanes and in other states, they are having detrimental forest fires.
That\'s what happens whey we abuse our environment.
Nature eventually takes its revenge.
We should continue taking care of mother nature.
Do you agree?
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you again on Tuesday. ^_^
~Teacher C[이름]
We has felt a climate change over and over as time goes away.
>> We experience climate change over and over as time goes away.
In this summer, it was not hotter than last summer, I think.
>> I think this year\'s summer was not as hot as the previous year\'s summer.
The speed of coming winter is seemed to be slow.
>> The speed of the coming winter seemed to be slow.
The autumn in Korea has been longer than last year.
>> The autumn in Korea is longer than last year.
The temperature between summer and autumn was not dramatically changed, so I didn\'t hear that there were so many cold patients in some hospitals.
>> [Do you mean]: The temperature difference between summer and autumn has not dramatically changed, so there are no news about the number of cold patients in some hospitals.
You know, if the dramatic change of the temperature would become a reason why people catch a cold.
>> You know that the dramatic change of temperature could become a reason why people catch a cold.
It may be also the affect of the climate change.
>> It may be also be the affect of climate change.
Anyway, I didn\'t see the colorful leaves under trees or on the branches.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Anyway, I hadn\'t seen the colorful leaves under trees or on the branches.
Last year, the maple was very beautiful like a fireworks.
>> Last year, the maple was very beautiful and it looked like fireworks.
Nowadays, the trees which had to be shown the colorful leaves didn\'t do that yet.
>> Nowadays, the trees which showed off colorful leaves haven\'t changed their colors yet.
In the autumn season, many people go to a mountain that is famous for the maple by several buses.
>> [Do you mean]: In the autumn season, many people go to a mountain using several buses to see the famous maple trees.
Anyway, the dramatic change seems to be not good.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Anyway, the dramatic change doesn\'t seems to be good.
The predictable thing is always good for everyone since we could prepare something in future.
>> The predictable thing is always good for everyone since we could prepare something in the future.
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