5-13th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Whenever I watch a sports game on a TV cheering my favorate team, I'm very excited.
So, if the team fail to win at the game, my feeling would be very exhuasting.
Sometimes, when the team is loosing, I don't want to see anymore.
However, in my deep mind I want to see promptly.
Today's baseball game seems to be like that.
My favorate team was leading with a big score until 7th inning.
But the head coach didn't change a pitcher who was continuously hitted, as a result, an opposite team got 6 scores at an inning.
If the opposite team lose the today's game, there would be nothing to game in this year and a final winner would be my favorate team.
So, it is very important, and I hate the head coach who didn't change the pitcher who threw more one hundres balls.
Of course, even if my team don't win in this game, it keep the lead as 3 to 2.
But in the sports game there is something like a flow of river.
So, someone lose it, they coudl not eaily catch it again.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! :)
Thanks for writing an essay for today.
I\'m happy to know that your favorite baseball team won the game and is now the champion. ^_^
I think you were really happy and excited to see them win.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great today.
See you again on Thursday.
Stay warm and happy. :)
~Teacher C[이름]
Whenever I watch a sports game on a TV cheering my favorate team, I\'m very excited.
>> Whenever I watch a sports game on TV to cheer for my favorite team, I\'m very excited.
So, if the team fail to win at the game, my feeling would be very exhuasting.
>> So, if the team fails to win at the game, I would feel very exhausted.
Sometimes, when the team is loosing, I don\'t want to see anymore.
>> Sometimes, when the team is loosing, I don\'t want to watch anymore.
However, in my deep mind I want to see promptly.
>> [Do you mean]: However, at the back of my mind, I want to see how the game ends.
Today\'s baseball game seems to be like that.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The baseball game today seems to be like that.
My favorate team was leading with a big score until 7th inning.
>> My favorite team was leading with a high score until the 7th inning.
But the head coach didn\'t change a pitcher who was continuously hitted, as a result, an opposite team got 6 scores at an inning.
>> But the head coach didn\'t change the pitcher who was continuously hit and as a result, the opposite team got a score of 6 at an inning.
If the opposite team lose the today\'s game, there would be nothing to game in this year and a final winner would be my favorate team.
>> If the opposite team loses in today\'s game, there would be no games left for this year and the final winner would be my favorite team.
So, it is very important, and I hate the head coach who didn\'t change the pitcher who threw more one hundres balls.
>> So, it is very important and I hate the head coach who didn\'t change the pitcher who threw more one hundred balls.
Of course, even if my team don\'t win in this game, it keep the lead as 3 to 2.
>> Of course, even if my team doesn\'t win in this game, it keep the lead score which is 3 to 2.
But in the sports game there is something like a flow of river.
>> But in the sports game there is something that we call a flow of a river.
So, someone lose it, they coudl not eaily catch it again.
>> So, when someone loses it, they could not easily catch it again.
Thanks for writing an essay for today.
I\'m happy to know that your favorite baseball team won the game and is now the champion. ^_^
I think you were really happy and excited to see them win.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great today.
See you again on Thursday.
Stay warm and happy. :)
~Teacher C[이름]
Whenever I watch a sports game on a TV cheering my favorate team, I\'m very excited.
>> Whenever I watch a sports game on TV to cheer for my favorite team, I\'m very excited.
So, if the team fail to win at the game, my feeling would be very exhuasting.
>> So, if the team fails to win at the game, I would feel very exhausted.
Sometimes, when the team is loosing, I don\'t want to see anymore.
>> Sometimes, when the team is loosing, I don\'t want to watch anymore.
However, in my deep mind I want to see promptly.
>> [Do you mean]: However, at the back of my mind, I want to see how the game ends.
Today\'s baseball game seems to be like that.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The baseball game today seems to be like that.
My favorate team was leading with a big score until 7th inning.
>> My favorite team was leading with a high score until the 7th inning.
But the head coach didn\'t change a pitcher who was continuously hitted, as a result, an opposite team got 6 scores at an inning.
>> But the head coach didn\'t change the pitcher who was continuously hit and as a result, the opposite team got a score of 6 at an inning.
If the opposite team lose the today\'s game, there would be nothing to game in this year and a final winner would be my favorate team.
>> If the opposite team loses in today\'s game, there would be no games left for this year and the final winner would be my favorite team.
So, it is very important, and I hate the head coach who didn\'t change the pitcher who threw more one hundres balls.
>> So, it is very important and I hate the head coach who didn\'t change the pitcher who threw more one hundred balls.
Of course, even if my team don\'t win in this game, it keep the lead as 3 to 2.
>> Of course, even if my team doesn\'t win in this game, it keep the lead score which is 3 to 2.
But in the sports game there is something like a flow of river.
>> But in the sports game there is something that we call a flow of a river.
So, someone lose it, they coudl not eaily catch it again.
>> So, when someone loses it, they could not easily catch it again.
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