5.14 HOMEWORK

2014-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! It is going to rain here in Changwon Korea. It's cloudy. Homework Do you worry about getting older? No, I don't worry about getting older.( Frankly,I a little worry about it) I know that nowadays it is a 100-year-old age. Time flies so fast, but I think I still have much time to do something that I want to do. So I am learning English now. I hope I will live without any regrets for the rest of my life. I really want to live in my rest life more faithful than any other person. Good luck!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! You finished your homework early today. Thank you for making it a habit to do your homework everyday. I appreciate it. Anyway, take care and have a good day! ~KELLY~ Hi there! Good morning! It is going to rain here in Changwon Korea. It\'s cloudy.>> Correct.HomeworkDo you worry about getting older?No, I don\'t worry about getting older. >> Correct. (Frankly, I a little worry about it) >> (Frankly speaking, I\'m a little worried about it.)I know that nowadays it is a 100-year-old age. >> I know that nowadays is a 100-year-old age. Time flies so fast, but I think I still have much time to do something that I want to do. >> Time flies so fast, but I think I still have much time to do the things that I want. So I am learning English now. >> Correct.  I hope I will live without any regrets for the rest of my life. >> Correct.  I really want to live in my rest life more faithful than any other person. >> I really want to be more faithful than any other person for the rest of my life.Good luck! >> Correct. 

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