5/14 homework

2018-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

1. You was playing cards last night. 2. Alice was walking with boyfriend around the lake 3. Caron was listening to the radio on his old radio. 4. We were reading a book about Australia before going trip to there. 5. Linda was looking for her ring in the garden. 6. Fiona and Sam were visiting the castle on vacation. 7. Ben was washing the car before meeting with his girl friends family. 8. Kim and I were waiting the boss int he park for two hours. 9. My sister was feeding the birds too much. 10. Greg and Phil was counting their money before sleep.

강사 첨삭

 I hope you had a great lunch there [이름]!

See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,


1. You was playing cards last night.

>>> You were playing cards.
 2. Alice was walking with boyfriend around the lake

>>> Alice was walking around the lake.
 3. Caron was listening to the radio on his old radio.

>>> Correct!
 4. We were reading a book about Australia before going trip to

>>> We were reading a book about Australia.
5. Linda was looking for her ring in the garden. 

>>> Correct!
 6. Fiona and Sam were visiting the castle on vacation.

>>>  OR: Fiona and Sam were visiting the castle.
 7. Ben was washing the car before meeting with his girl friends family.

>>>  Ben was washing the car. 
 8. Kim and I were waiting the boss int he park for two hours.

>>>  Kim and I were waiting in the park.
 9. My sister was feeding the birds too much. 

>>> Correct!
 10. Greg and Phil was counting their money before sleep.

>>> Greg and Phil were counting their money.  

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