5.14 homework!
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I -saw- a lot of horse-drawn carriages in rural areas while I -was- through Bulgaria.
>> I saw a lot of horse-drawn carriages in rural areas while I was traveling through Bulgaria.
2. Every year, tens of thousands of tourists -travel- the Blue Mosque, which -lived- by the Romans in the sixth century.
>>Every year, tens of thousands of tourists visit the Blue Mosque, which was built by the Romans in the sixth century.
3. Helen -thought- the crowded streets at all as there were a lot of people who -was- to sell souvenirs to tourists, which she found really annoying.
>>Helen didn\'t enjoy the crowded streets at all as there were a lot of people who were trying to sell souvenirs to tourists, which she found really annoying.
4. Be silent, please. I can\'t hear anything. I -taking- a holiday in Virginia with the travel agency at the moment.
>> Be silent, please. I can\'t hear anything. I am booking a holiday in Virginia with the travel agency at the moment.
5. I -have not- so many clothes with me when i go for a short vacation because I hate carrying around a lot of luggage.
>> I don\'t take so many clothes with me when i go for a short vacation because I hate carrying around a lot of luggage.
6. Our hotel room -saw- the beach and we could also see the whole area of the hotel from there.
>>Our hotel room was overlooking the beach and we could also see the whole area of the hotel from there.
7. The natural and historical riches of Turkey -bring- millions of visitors from around the world.
>>The natural and historical riches of Turkey fascinate millions of visitors from around the world.
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