5-14th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In Korean series of the baseball, my favorite team eventually took a last winner place.
The game in last night was very exciting and it was nervous to me.
The head coach didn't change the pitcher even though he didn't do well.
Finally, in the last inning the opposite team made a full base through an error and a four ball.
At last inning, the starter pitcher who won the second game of Korean series again appeared on the mound.
But it was also not easy to him.
He usually starts the game from the first inning, so he couldn't easily end the inning.
However, he is the best pitch of this year in Korea.
He didn't throw away a lot of fans and he eventually overcame the obstacles which his colleagues commit the error.
At last, the team became a last winner in this year.
Even though the team won the game, it don't give anything to me but i'm happy.
The sports game is to give someone the passion or the energy whenever we see it.
I have to wait the baseball game until a next spring.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I could really feel your happiness and excitement from this composition.
Go, Kia Tigers!!! kkk. ^_^
I\'m happy for you too.
I hope your team will win the next season again.
Let\'s cross our fingers to that.
See you on Thursday.
~Teacher C[이름] :)
In Korean series of the baseball, my favorite team eventually took a last winner place.
>> In the Korean baseball series, my favorite team eventually took a last winning place.
The game in last night was very exciting and it was nervous to me.
>> The game last night was very exciting and made me nervous.
The head coach didn\'t change the pitcher even though he didn\'t do well.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The head coach didn\'t change the pitcher even though he was not playing well.
Finally, in the last inning the opposite team made a full base through an error and a four ball.
>> Finally, in the last inning, the opposite team made a full base through an error and a four ball.
At last inning, the starter pitcher who won the second game of Korean series again appeared on the mound.
>> At the last inning, the starter pitcher who won the second game of the Korean series again appeared on the mound.
But it was also not easy to him.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> But it was also not easy for him.
He usually starts the game from the first inning, so he couldn\'t easily end the inning.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> He often starts the game from the first inning, so he couldn\'t easily end the inning.
However, he is the best pitch of this year in Korea.
>> However, he is the best pitcher of this year in Korea.
He didn\'t throw away a lot of fans and he eventually overcame the obstacles which his colleagues commit the error.
>> [Do you mean]: He didn\'t disappoint a lot of fans and he eventually overcame the obstacles which his colleagues caused at first.
At last, the team became a last winner in this year.
>> At last, the team became the last winner for this year.
Even though the team won the game, it don\'t give anything to me but i\'m happy.
>> Even though the team won the game, it didn\'t give me anything but I\'m happy.
The sports game is to give someone the passion or the energy whenever we see it.
>> The sports game gives someone the passion or the energy whenever he/she sees it.
I have to wait the baseball game until a next spring.
>> I have to wait for the next baseball season until the next spring.
I could really feel your happiness and excitement from this composition.
Go, Kia Tigers!!! kkk. ^_^
I\'m happy for you too.
I hope your team will win the next season again.
Let\'s cross our fingers to that.
See you on Thursday.
~Teacher C[이름] :)
In Korean series of the baseball, my favorite team eventually took a last winner place.
>> In the Korean baseball series, my favorite team eventually took a last winning place.
The game in last night was very exciting and it was nervous to me.
>> The game last night was very exciting and made me nervous.
The head coach didn\'t change the pitcher even though he didn\'t do well.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The head coach didn\'t change the pitcher even though he was not playing well.
Finally, in the last inning the opposite team made a full base through an error and a four ball.
>> Finally, in the last inning, the opposite team made a full base through an error and a four ball.
At last inning, the starter pitcher who won the second game of Korean series again appeared on the mound.
>> At the last inning, the starter pitcher who won the second game of the Korean series again appeared on the mound.
But it was also not easy to him.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> But it was also not easy for him.
He usually starts the game from the first inning, so he couldn\'t easily end the inning.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> He often starts the game from the first inning, so he couldn\'t easily end the inning.
However, he is the best pitch of this year in Korea.
>> However, he is the best pitcher of this year in Korea.
He didn\'t throw away a lot of fans and he eventually overcame the obstacles which his colleagues commit the error.
>> [Do you mean]: He didn\'t disappoint a lot of fans and he eventually overcame the obstacles which his colleagues caused at first.
At last, the team became a last winner in this year.
>> At last, the team became the last winner for this year.
Even though the team won the game, it don\'t give anything to me but i\'m happy.
>> Even though the team won the game, it didn\'t give me anything but I\'m happy.
The sports game is to give someone the passion or the energy whenever we see it.
>> The sports game gives someone the passion or the energy whenever he/she sees it.
I have to wait the baseball game until a next spring.
>> I have to wait for the next baseball season until the next spring.
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