5.15 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning! I have a hectic schedule today.So I submit my homework more early.
And I found out our a new text book.I think it is a kind of grammar book. Good and thank you for your recommendation.
Homework.
Do you think all children should study art at school?
Yes, I think so. Humans are born with lots of talent. Unfortunately we have been live without knowing it well. It is just because we don't find out our personal talent early. The children is our hope. I think children should be given many opporttunities to study at various fields. Art should be applied to the same rule. I wish I could syudy any art in my childhood.
Thank you! Byebye!
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework first before anything else. Anyway, I\'m glad that you like the book that I chose for you. Have a good day!
~KeLLy~
Hi ma\'am! Good morning!
>> Correct.
I have a hectic schedule today.
>> Correct.
So I submit my homework more early.
>> So I submitted my homework early today.
And I found out our a new text book.
>> And I already checked our new textbook.
I think it is a kind of grammar book.
>> I think it is a grammar book.
Good and thank you for your recommendation.
>> Correct.Homework.Do you think all children should study art at school?Yes, I think so. Humans are born with lots of talent.
>> Correct.
Unfortunately we have been live without knowing it well.
>> Unfortunately, we are not aware of it.
It is just because we don\'t find out our personal talent early.
>> It is because we did not discover our talents early.
The children is our hope.
>> Children are our hope.
I think children should be given many opportunities to study at various fields.
>> I think children should be given many opportunities to excel in various fields.
Art should be applied to the same rule.
>> This rule should also be applied in Art.
I wish I could syudy any art in my childhood.>> I wish I could have studied Art in my childhood.Thank you! Byebye!
>> Correct.
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