5.15 Homework

2015-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! Today is a teacher's day. Thank you for everything. If I live near you, I could treat a fancy dinner.... How can you promote Korean culture. The Korean wave was beginning with drama and k-pop and it have been increasing the interest of others such as Korean food,Korean language. It also gives us a lot of economic effects of a wide and variouse fields. To promote Korean culture, we need to come up with a new cultural material actively. I think it is necessary to be approached the Korea on the internet for foreigners. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon MR. [이름]! Thank you for the greeting and thank you for being a loyal student also. Anyway, thank you for sharing Korean culture to us. We really love your country.^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct. Today is a teacher\'s day. >> Today is teacher\'s day. Thank you for everything. >> Correct.If I live near you, I could treat a fancy dinner.... >> If I live near you, I will treat you with a fancy dinner.How can you promote Korean culture.The Korean wave was beginning with drama and k-pop and it have been increasing the interest of others such as Korean food,Korean language. >> The Korean wave was the beginning of Korean drama and K-pop and it caught the interest of others to also like Korean foods and learn Korean language. It also gives us a lot of economic effects of a wide and variouse fields. >> It also gives us a lot of economic benefits in various fields. To promote Korean culture, we need to come up with a new cultural material actively. >> To promote Korean culture, we need to come up with a new cultural material. I think it is necessary to be approached the Korea on the internet for foreigners. >> I think that it is necessary to promote Korea in other countries on the internet. Thank you! >> Correct.

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