5.15 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! Today is a teacher's day. Thank you for everything.
If I live near you, I could treat a fancy dinner....
How can you promote Korean culture.
The Korean wave was beginning with drama and k-pop and it have been increasing the interest of others such as Korean food,Korean language. It also gives us a lot of economic effects of a wide and variouse fields. To promote Korean culture, we need to come up with a new cultural material actively. I think it is necessary to be approached the Korea on the internet for foreigners.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon MR. [이름]!
Thank you for the greeting and thank you for being a loyal student also. Anyway, thank you for sharing Korean culture to us. We really love your country.^^
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.
Today is a teacher\'s day.
>> Today is teacher\'s day.
Thank you for everything.
>> Correct.If I live near you, I could treat a fancy dinner....
>> If I live near you, I will treat you with a fancy dinner.How can you promote Korean culture.The Korean wave was beginning with drama and k-pop and it have been increasing the interest of others such as Korean food,Korean language.
>> The Korean wave was the beginning of Korean drama and K-pop and it caught the interest of others to also like Korean foods and learn Korean language.
It also gives us a lot of economic effects of a wide and variouse fields.
>> It also gives us a lot of economic benefits in various fields.
To promote Korean culture, we need to come up with a new cultural material actively.
>> To promote Korean culture, we need to come up with a new cultural material.
I think it is necessary to be approached the Korea on the internet for foreigners. >> I think that it is necessary to promote Korea in other countries on the internet. Thank you!
>> Correct.
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