5/16 HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
About Kelly teacher!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*She is an army.
*She likes to watch a BTS concert.(maybe)
THE END
강사 첨삭
Hi Zoe!🌞
Thank you for doing your homework. You are right! I really like watching BTS concerts!💜
~Kelly🌸
About Kelly teacher!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>> About Teacher Kelly.
*She is an army.
*She is an army.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: She is a BTS Army.
*She likes to watch a BTS concert.(maybe)
*She likes to watch a BTS concert.(maybe)
>> CORRECT
THE END
THE END
>> CORRECT
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