5.16 Homework

2014-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi ma'am! Good morning! I can speak English more comfortable with foreigner, but I can't speak English well in our class. I guess it just because it always start early in the morning. Homework For you, what are the best foods for a healthy body? I was born to have hypertension by nature. So I have been taking blood pressure pills for 30 years. I don't like meat. I have to eat lots of vegetables and I eat some nuts everyday. Above all, I think the fruits are the best foods for my healthy body. Thank you!

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Hello Mr. [이름]! You accomplished your homework early today. You are the first student to submit his homework today. Great job! Anyway, don\'t think that you don\'t speak well in the class because you are doing a good job. But I know that you can still do better that is why I keep on encouraging you. You have come a long way but there\'s more ins tore for you. Tahnk you for todays class and see you tomorrow. ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good morning! >> Correct.I can speak English more comfortable with foreigner, but I can\'t speak English well in our class. >> I can speak English more comfortably with a foreigner, but I can\'t speak English well in our class. I guess it just because it always start early in the morning.>> I guess it is because it always starts early in the morning.HomeworkFor you, what are the best foods for a healthy body?I was born to have hypertension by nature. >> I was born to have hypertension. >> I am hypertensive. So I have been taking blood pressure pills for 30 years. >> I have been taking pills for my hypertension for thirty [30] years now. I don\'t like meat. >> Correct. I have to eat lots of vegetables and I eat some nuts everyday. >> Correct. Above all, I think the fruits are the best foods for my healthy body.>> Above all, I think that fruits are the best foods for my healthy body. Thank you! >> Correct.

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