5.16 Homework

2014-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! Talk about your day yesterday. I had a hectic schedule yesterday. I woke up at 6 o'clock. I was reading English book for 20 minutes.and I took lesson. I had important meeting with our chinese customer. after the meeting, we went out for dinner. I drunk some achohol with my customer. we talker about our business. I came back home 10 pm and I went to bed. Byebye!

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday Mr. [이름]! You really had a hectic day yesterday. I hope that you will have a great day today and always. Take care and enjoy your weekend. ~KeLLy~ Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.Talk about your day yesterday.I had a hectic schedule yesterday. >> Correct. I woke up at 6 o\'clock. >> Correct. I was reading English book for 20 minutes. and I took lesson. >> I read my English book for 20 minutes and I had a lesson after. I had important meeting with our chinese customer. >> I had an important meeting with our Chinese customer. after the meeting, we went out for dinner. >> Correct. I drunk some achohol with my customer. >> Correct. we talker about our business. >>We talked about our business. I came back home 10 pm and I went to bed.>> I came back home at 10 pm and I went to bed after.Byebye! >> Correct.

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