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2018-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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[Have you ever delivered bad news to someone? What was it? If not, how do you think you should break bad news to a person?] I think the most difficult to deliver bad news is for health problem of family. My mother had a surgery two years ago. At that time, I was in Japan. My sister called me, but she didn't say anything a little long time. So, I felt something is wrong to my family. If we have to delivered bad news to someone unfortunately, we have to lead to relax other. And, it's better to talk slowly and in detail.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

I hope the weather there is still good.

Enjoy your day! See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,


[Have you ever delivered bad news to someone? What was it? If not, how do you think you should break bad news to a person?]

I think the most difficult to deliver bad news is for health problem of family. 

>>> I think the most difficult news to deliver is related to a loved one\'s bad health condition.
 My mother had a surgery two years ago. 

>>> Correct!
 At that time, I was in Japan.

>>> Correct!
 My sister called me, but she didn\'t say anything a little long time.

>>> My sister called me but she talk for a while.
 So, I felt something is wrong to my family. 

>>> So, I felt there is something wrong with my family.
 If we have to delivered bad news to someone unfortunately, we have to lead to relax other.

>>> If we have to deliver bad news to someone, we have to do our best to better the situation or lighten up the mood.
 And, it\'s better to talk slowly and in detail.

>>> Correct!

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