5.17 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning? Great Easter! Have a good time.
Homework
How important is having breakfast?
I think having breakfast is very important for our health. I always eat a breakfast every day, even I drunk until wee hours. I had some bad experiences with my wife about breakfast when I drunk so much. I argued with my wife about that, but I had to eat breakfast anyway. I like eating and enjoy eating is one of the important pleasure in my life. I believe health is more important than anything else.Eating nice food is the best way to keep our health.
Thank you! See you next monday! byebye!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]! I totally agree with you that breakfast is very important for our health. So, don\'t miss your breakfast to stay helathy. Have a good weekend. See you on Monday!
~KELLY~
Hi there! Good morning? Great Easter! Have a good time.>> Correct.HomeworkHow important is having breakfast?I think having breakfast is very important for our health.
>> Correct.
I always eat a breakfast every day, even I drunk until wee hours.
>> I eat breakfast every day, even if I drink until wee hours.
I had some bad experiences with my wife about breakfast when I drunk so much.
>> I had some bad experiences with my wife about breakfast when I was so drunk.
I argued with my wife about that, but I had to eat breakfast anyway.
>> Correct.
I like eating and enjoy eating is one of the important pleasure in my life.
>> I like eating and it is one of the most important pleasures in my life.
I believe health is more important than anything else.
>> I believe that health is more important than anything else.
Eating nice food is the best way to keep our health.>> Eating a nutritious food is the best way to keep our health.Thank you! See you next monday! byebye!
>> Correct.
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