5/17 homework

2018-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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What's the most important decision you've made last year? Answer in 2 to 3 sentences. I guess that many things happened meaningful to me. Last year is first year that I began to live in Holland. Everything is new and fresh but in the other hand so afraid. I should follow curriculum of our school but the good thing was that I can decide the way I want to go, when it comes to my work. Every week I've got to fight with professor how I go, there is gap look so different between us. But I learned whenever I choose or do, it is finally my project. So I did effort to decide following my mind. So this is the best I've made last year.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]! ^^,)

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

Be careful with your verb tenses. You were talking about something that happened last year so be sure to use past tense.^^

Enjoy the rest of the day!

_T. Mayleen :)


I guess that many things happened meaningful to me.

>>> I guess many things that happened to me are meaningful.
Last year is first year that I began to live in Holland.

>>> Last year was the first year that I began to live in Holland.

Everything is new and fresh but in the other hand so afraid.

>>> Everything was new and fresh for me, but on the other hand, I was so afraid.

I should follow curriculum of our school but the good thing was that I can decide the way I want to go, when it comes to my work.

>>> I should follow the curriculum of our school but the good thing was that I can decide when I want to go, when it comes to my work.

Every week I\'ve got to fight with professor how I go, there is gap look so different between us.

>>> Every week I would get into a fight with my professor because there\'s a big gap between us.

But I learned whenever I choose or do, it is finally my project.

>>> Then I learned that whatever I choose to do, it\'s all on me.

So I did effort to decide following my mind.

>>> And so I did effort to follow what\'s on my mind.
So this is the best I\'ve made last year.

>>> I guess that\'s the best decision I\'ve made last year.

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