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What is the standard of beauty in your country?
Beauty standard, generally speaking, is about what people view other people as beautiful, which usually includes body shape and facial appearance. Parts of Korean beauty standards were to have a glowing and youthful skin, double eyelids, a European nose, small V- shaped face and small, plump and pink lips.
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Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. I know some celebrities who are perfect examples of this standard you mentioned. They do look beautiful.
- T. Beth
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Beauty standard, generally speaking, is about what people view other people as beautiful, which usually includes body shape and facial appearance. >>> correct
>>> OR: Generally speaking, beauty standard is how people perceive other people as beautiful which usually includes body shape and facial features.
Parts of Korean beauty standards were to have a glowing and youthful skin, double eyelids, a European nose, small V- shaped face and small, plump and pink lips.
>>> OR: Parts of Korean beauty standards are to have a glowing and youthful skin, double eyelids, a European nose, small V- shaped face and small, plump and pink lips.
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