5/18 homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was nineteen, I feel would like give up about college admission.
But my father told me like this. \"You trying to harder enough at the moment day by day. Thus I\'m sure that you gain good conclusion\"
After I listened my father saying, I felt energetic.
Finally, I gained conclusion that I wanted.
강사 첨삭
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Thanks you do much for doing your homework. See you next week and have a good sleep!
- Kristine ^^
When I was nineteen, I feel would like give up about college admission.
>> When I was nineteen, I was ready to give up on getting into college.
But my father told me like this. \"You trying to harder enough at the moment day by day. Thus I\'m sure that you gain good conclusion\"
But my father told me like this. \"You trying to harder enough at the moment day by day. Thus I\'m sure that you gain good conclusion\"
>> But my father told me this. \"You are working hard enough right now, day by day, and I am certain that you will succeed.\"
After I listened my father saying, I felt energetic.
After I listened my father saying, I felt energetic.
>> I felt inspired after hearing what my father had to say.
Finally, I gained conclusion that I wanted.
Finally, I gained conclusion that I wanted.
>> Finally, I was able to succeed.
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