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It\'s a very important point.
Many people are in a panic due to this coronavirus.
I realized that the human being is very weird.
Humans are absolutely social existence and unbearable restrictions and restraint.
And although we are living in the online era, offline relationships and freedom are very important.
Restrictions and restraint make people depressed and sometimes feel like I am a not important person.
The advent of the industrial revolution will free humans from labor.
However, people don\'t like unlimited freedom.
We know that we want to make society and want to be a member, and it requires something rules that limit personal freedom.
I think there are two kinds of work, physical and mental works.
People often tell us that we have to study hard in order to get a job which our bodies to be comfortable.
However, sometimes it is easier to work with the body than with the brain.
Before the industrial evolution, we have to find where will we expel our energy.
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It\'s a very important point.bMany people are in a panic due to this coronavirus.
>> It\'s very important to know that many people are in a panic due to the corona virus pandemic.
I realized that the human being is very weird.
I realized that the human being is very weird.
>> correct
Humans are absolutely social existence and unbearable restrictions and restraint.
Humans are absolutely social existence and unbearable restrictions and restraint.
>> Humans are absolutely existing for socializing but they are unbearably restricted or restrained.
And although we are living in the online era, offline relationships and freedom are very important.
And although we are living in the online era, offline relationships and freedom are very important.
>> correct
Restrictions and restraint make people depressed and sometimes feel like I am a not important person.
Restrictions and restraint make people depressed and sometimes feel like I am a not important person.
>> Restrictions and restraint make people depressed and sometimes make them feel they are not important.
The advent of the industrial revolution will free humans from labor. However, people don\'t like unlimited freedom.
>> correct
We know that we want to make society and want to be a member, and it requires something rules that limit personal freedom.
The advent of the industrial revolution will free humans from labor. However, people don\'t like unlimited freedom.
>> correct
We know that we want to make society and want to be a member, and it requires something rules that limit personal freedom.
>> We know that we want to develop the society and want to be part of it, and to maintain harmony and peace rules are required but they limit personal freedom.
I think there are two kinds of work, physical and mental works.
I think there are two kinds of work, physical and mental works.
>> correct
People often tell us that we have to study hard in order to get a job which our bodies to be comfortable.
People often tell us that we have to study hard in order to get a job which our bodies to be comfortable.
>> People often tell us to study hard in order to obtain a job to be able to live comfortably.
However, sometimes it is easier to work with the body than with the brain.
However, sometimes it is easier to work with the body than with the brain.
>> correct
Before the industrial evolution, we have to find where will we expel our energy.
Before the industrial evolution, we have to find where will we expel our energy.
>> correct
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