5/19
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK: (Yesterday)
Kindly answer the following in essay form.
If you could have three wishes that would come true, what would they be? (No, you can’t wish for more wishes)
First one is I have a bird,
Second one is I clean our planet,
And last one is delete global warming.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Second one is I clean our planet,
>> Second, I would wish for a clean planet.
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First one is I have a bird,
>> First of all, I wish to have a bird.
Second one is I clean our planet,
>> Second, I would wish for a clean planet.
And last one is delete global warming.
>> The last one is for global warming to be eliminated.
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