5.20 Homework

2014-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

HIma'am! Good morning! It is raining here now. I feel a little lonely. Homework What is the best way to find a job? We need a lot of efforts to get a job. The skill of speaking English,self-expression are help us to be got job. They can give us more opportunities. Sometimes it depends on our luck. To get a good job, the harder we work, the more luck we have. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! Cheer up and enjoy the day! There are good reasons for you to smile. Seize the day! ~KeLLy~ HI ma\'am! Good morning! It is raining here now. I feel a little lonely.>> Correct. *** Hi ma\'am!HomeworkWhat is the best way to find a job?We need a lot of efforts to get a job. >> Correct. The skill of speaking English, self-expression are help us to be got job. >> A good English speaking skill and self-expression help us to get a job. They can give us more opportunities. Sometimes it depends on our luck. >> Correct.  To get a good job, the harder we work, the more luck we have.>> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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