5-20th Homework
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I love to see a SF movie.
There are so many kinds of movies, for example, comedy, action, SF, and drama.
There are also other movies that deal real stories having impression.
The main character experience a lot of difficulty to do something but he or she finally overcome its.
While he or she undergo tough situations, there would be some impression or some laugh.
There must be some conflicts between someone and the main character, and then it would be serious.
But I don't like such a movie including sadness.
I specially like to see the action movies including science fictions.
In the action movies, we could easily divide into two groups, the good or bad.
The distinction is very simple and not complex.
In the movie, the bad guy keeps his characteristics while screening it.
The good guy also keeps his traits until ending the movie.
So, I don't complex with the characteristics of the actors, which is my favorite thing in the action movies.
In real life, there are so many serious things.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Thank you for taking the time to write something for today.
You have lots of good sentences today. Good job!
Anyway, my favorite movies are romantic comedy films. kkk.
See you again tomorrow. :)
~Teacher C[이름]
I love to see a SF movie.
>> I love to see an SF movie.
There are so many kinds of movies, for example, comedy, action, SF, and drama.
>> There are so many kinds of movies; for example, comedy, action, SF, and drama.
There are also other movies that deal real stories having impression.
>> [Do you mean]: There are also other movies that deal with real stories leaving a great impression on the audience.
The main character experience a lot of difficulty to do something but he or she finally overcome its.
>> The main character experiences a lot of difficulties in doing something but he or she finally overcomes them.
While he or she undergo tough situations, there would be some impression or some laugh.
>> While he or she undergoes tough situations, there would be some comments or mockeries.
There must be some conflicts between someone and the main character, and then it would be serious.
>> There must be some conflicts between someone and the main character, and they would be serious.
But I don\'t like such a movie including sadness.
>> But I don\'t like such a movie including the sad ones.
I specially like to see the action movies including science fictions.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I specifically like to see the action movies including science fictions.
In the action movies, we could easily divide into two groups, the good or bad.
>> In the action movies, we could easily divide the characters into two groups, the good or the bad.
The distinction is very simple and not complex.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The distinction is very easy and not complicated.
In the movie, the bad guy keeps his characteristics while screening it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In the movie, the bad guy maintains his characteristics while filming it.
The good guy also keeps his traits until ending the movie.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The good guy also maintains his character until the movie ends.
So, I don\'t complex with the characteristics of the actors, which is my favorite thing in the action movies.
>> So, I am not confused with the characteristics of the actors, which is my favorite in the action movies.
In real life, there are so many serious things.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There are so many serious things in real life.
Thank you for taking the time to write something for today.
You have lots of good sentences today. Good job!
Anyway, my favorite movies are romantic comedy films. kkk.
See you again tomorrow. :)
~Teacher C[이름]
I love to see a SF movie.
>> I love to see an SF movie.
There are so many kinds of movies, for example, comedy, action, SF, and drama.
>> There are so many kinds of movies; for example, comedy, action, SF, and drama.
There are also other movies that deal real stories having impression.
>> [Do you mean]: There are also other movies that deal with real stories leaving a great impression on the audience.
The main character experience a lot of difficulty to do something but he or she finally overcome its.
>> The main character experiences a lot of difficulties in doing something but he or she finally overcomes them.
While he or she undergo tough situations, there would be some impression or some laugh.
>> While he or she undergoes tough situations, there would be some comments or mockeries.
There must be some conflicts between someone and the main character, and then it would be serious.
>> There must be some conflicts between someone and the main character, and they would be serious.
But I don\'t like such a movie including sadness.
>> But I don\'t like such a movie including the sad ones.
I specially like to see the action movies including science fictions.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I specifically like to see the action movies including science fictions.
In the action movies, we could easily divide into two groups, the good or bad.
>> In the action movies, we could easily divide the characters into two groups, the good or the bad.
The distinction is very simple and not complex.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The distinction is very easy and not complicated.
In the movie, the bad guy keeps his characteristics while screening it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In the movie, the bad guy maintains his characteristics while filming it.
The good guy also keeps his traits until ending the movie.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The good guy also maintains his character until the movie ends.
So, I don\'t complex with the characteristics of the actors, which is my favorite thing in the action movies.
>> So, I am not confused with the characteristics of the actors, which is my favorite in the action movies.
In real life, there are so many serious things.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There are so many serious things in real life.
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