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What are your personal responsibilities to stop the spread of COVID19?
Everyone is doing what they can do to overcome the COVID 19 crisis. This crisis made us think about what we can do in our position to help others because unlike normal times, we are sure that helping one another will also benefit me. Through this crisis, many of us has thought about what we can do in our position to stop spreading COVID 19, and give hand to others. I came to the conclusion that ordinary citizens, such as I cannot cause a visible difference. However, I am also positive that without the effort of citizens, stopping the spread of COVID 19 will be impossible. Thus, my responsibilities to stop the spread of COVID 19 is following the instructions from the government, and give help to those who are having a hard time because of COVID 19.
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What are your personal responsibilities to stop the spread of COVID19?
>> Correct
Everyone is doing what they can do to overcome the COVID 19 crisis.
>> Correct
This crisis made us think about what we can do in our position to help others because unlike normal times,
>> This crisis teaches us to help more people unlike before during the normal days that we had.
we are sure that helping one another will also benefit me.
>> Correct
Through this crisis, many of us has thought about what we can do in our position to stop spreading COVID 19, and give hand to others.
>> In this crisis, most people have been helping one another to stop the spread of the said virus.
I came to the conclusion that ordinary citizens, such as I cannot cause a visible difference.
>> I came to the conclusion that ordinary citizens like me cannot cause a significant difference.
However, I am also positive that without the effort of citizens, stopping the spread of COVID 19 will be impossible.
>> However, I remain positive that our efforts to stop the spread of the virus can contribute a lot.
Thus, my responsibilities to stop the spread of COVID 19 is following the instructions from the government, and give help to those who are having a hard time because of COVID 19.
>> Thus, obeying the government and helping in my own little ways are my responsibilities.
I am delighted to hear you speaking more confidently in English. Keep learning.
What are your personal responsibilities to stop the spread of COVID19?
>> Correct
Everyone is doing what they can do to overcome the COVID 19 crisis.
>> Correct
This crisis made us think about what we can do in our position to help others because unlike normal times,
>> This crisis teaches us to help more people unlike before during the normal days that we had.
we are sure that helping one another will also benefit me.
>> Correct
Through this crisis, many of us has thought about what we can do in our position to stop spreading COVID 19, and give hand to others.
>> In this crisis, most people have been helping one another to stop the spread of the said virus.
I came to the conclusion that ordinary citizens, such as I cannot cause a visible difference.
>> I came to the conclusion that ordinary citizens like me cannot cause a significant difference.
However, I am also positive that without the effort of citizens, stopping the spread of COVID 19 will be impossible.
>> However, I remain positive that our efforts to stop the spread of the virus can contribute a lot.
Thus, my responsibilities to stop the spread of COVID 19 is following the instructions from the government, and give help to those who are having a hard time because of COVID 19.
>> Thus, obeying the government and helping in my own little ways are my responsibilities.
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