5.21 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
What is more important to you safety or convenience?
Of course, safety is more important than convenience to me. But some people prefer cnovenience.It is very dangerous idea. Let's consider the ship accident Jindo in Korea.Imagine how painful it would be if you got it.I think our body is no longer just belong to ourselves.Actually, we should remember there are always our lovely family with us. Safety is the best one what we should consider anytime,anywhere.Be careful!
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Happy midweek Mr. [이름]! Your essay is a great reminder for everybody to be safe all the time and to remember our family always. Keep safe also and stay happy.
~KeLLy~
Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.What is more important to you safety or convenience?Of course, safety is more important than convenience to me.
>> Correct.
But some people prefer cnovenience.
>> Correct.** convenience
It is very dangerous idea.
>> It is a very dangerous idea.
Let\'s consider the ship accident Jindo in Korea.
>> Let\'s consider the ship Jindo accident in Korea.
Imagine how painful it would be if you got it.
>> Imagine how painful it would be if you were there.
I think our body is no longer just belong to ourselves.
>> I think othat ur body no longer just belong to ourselves.
Actually, we should remember there are always our lovely family with us.
>> Actually, we should always remember our lovely family whereever we are.
Safety is the best one what we should consider anytime, anywhere. Be careful!>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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