5.21 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good afternoon! Are you enjoying your long holiday?
If you were asked to send one thing to represent your country in an internation exhibition. What would it be and why?
I think that the best thing to represent our country in an international exhibition is Samsung Smartphone. Samsung phone is well-known for it's excellent quality and shape.
All of my family members are using the smartphone.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi MR. [이름]!
Thanks for sending this in. It is no doubt that Samsung made its name all over the world. I am also using a Samsung smartphone. kkk Anyway, great homework for today. I hope that you\'ll have a great long weekend. See you!
~~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good afternoon! Are you enjoying your long holiday?
>> Correct.
If you were asked to send one thing to represent your country in an internation exhibition. What would it be and why?
I think that the best thing to represent our country in an international exhibition is Samsung Smartphone.
>> Correct.
Samsung phone is well-known for it\'s excellent quality and shape.
>> Correct.
All of my family members are using the smartphone.
>> Correct.
Thank you!
>> Correct.
Thanks for sending this in. It is no doubt that Samsung made its name all over the world. I am also using a Samsung smartphone. kkk Anyway, great homework for today. I hope that you\'ll have a great long weekend. See you!
~~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good afternoon! Are you enjoying your long holiday?
>> Correct.
If you were asked to send one thing to represent your country in an internation exhibition. What would it be and why?
I think that the best thing to represent our country in an international exhibition is Samsung Smartphone.
>> Correct.
Samsung phone is well-known for it\'s excellent quality and shape.
>> Correct.
All of my family members are using the smartphone.
>> Correct.
Thank you!
>> Correct.
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