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2019-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. author’s personal point of view 2. excellence 3. compilation of 4. chapter 5. circumstance 1. This essay was described by author\'s personal point of view. His meaningful lines attract many people and give them comfort. 2. I usually order household items in online market. I feel this convenient service\'s excellence because i just choose and wait for. 3. The compilation of action figures are popular to people who are big fan of Avengers movies. They are expensive a bit but most people collect them. 4. I already know this chapter inside and out, so i am not nervous. 5. That circumstance made me hard but i faced hard things although i was afraid of. Afterwards, it became just one tiny experience and even i don\'t remember.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework. I hope you study the corrections carefully. 


 


Cheers!

Jean



1. author’s personal point of view
2. excellence 
3. compilation of
4. chapter
5. circumstance 

1. This essay was described by author\'s personal point of view. His meaningful lines attract many people and give them comfort. 
>> This essay was written from the author\'s personal point of view. His meaningful lines attract many people and give them comfort. 

2. I usually order household items in online market. I feel this convenient service\'s excellence because i just choose and wait for.
>>  I usually order household items from an online market. This service\'s excellence is enough reason for me to use it because I just choose what I want and wait for it to be delivered. 

3. The compilation of action figures are popular to people who are big fan of Avengers movies. They are expensive a bit but most people collect them. 
>> The collection of action figures is popular among people who are big fans of Avengers movies. They are quite costly but most people still collect them. 

4. I already know this chapter inside and out, so i am not nervous.
>> correct

5. That circumstance made me hard but i faced hard things although i was afraid of. Afterwards, it became just one tiny experience and even i don\'t remember.
>> That circumstance made life hard for me, but I faced difficult things although I was afraid. Afterwards, it became just one tiny experience that I can\'t even remember. 

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