5-21th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In real life, there are so many serious problems that we have to face.
In this situation, I don't want to get an experience to be similar with real life's problem.
The purpose that I see the movie is to relax my mind and to forget some problems in a while.
So, even if there are some problems in the action movies, they are not real things.
Anyway, today was a teamwork day that is to make a good relationship with others.
There were some candidates for us to do today.
We selected the favorite thing that we want to do.
The final selection that was gotten the highest score was to see the movie.
But I wonder that seeing the movie would be helpful or not.
It's because there is no interaction with others.
So, I prefer an outdoor activity to seeing the movies.
In the candidates. there were bowling game and riding a Segway.
My selection was to ride the Segway.
My colleagues are getting old, they don't want to move their body actively.
They always want to do nothing and want to go home early.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I agree that being active and doing group work is so much better in building teamwork.
In addition to that, being active will help you stay healthy and strong.
So keep doing it.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you tomorrow. ^_^
~Teacher C[이름]
In real life, there are so many serious problems that we have to face.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There are so many serious problems that we have to face in real life.
In this situation, I don\'t want to get an experience to be similar with real life\'s problem.
>> In this situation, I don\'t want to get an experience that is similar with real life\'s problems.
The purpose that I see the movie is to relax my mind and to forget some problems in a while.
>> The purpose why I see a movie is to relax my mind and to forget some problems in a while.
So, even if there are some problems in the action movies, they are not real things.
>> That\'s why, even if there are some problems in the action movies, they are not true.
Anyway, today was a teamwork day that is to make a good relationship with others.
>> Anyway, today was a teamwork day so it is a good way to make a good relationship with others.
There were some candidates for us to do today.
>> [Do you mean]: There were some things for us to do today.
We selected the favorite thing that we want to do.
>> We selected the favorite thing that we wanted to do.
The final selection that was gotten the highest score was to see the movie.
>> The final activity that was selected and got the highest score was to see a movie.
But I wonder that seeing the movie would be helpful or not.
>> But I wondered if seeing a movie would be helpful or not.
It\'s because there is no interaction with others.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s because it does not facilitate interaction with others.
So, I prefer an outdoor activity to seeing the movies.
>> So, I prefer an outdoor activity over seeing movies.
In the candidates. there were bowling game and riding a Segway.
>> Among the choices were a bowling game and riding a Segway.
My selection was to ride the Segway.
>> My choice was to ride the Segway.
My colleagues are getting old, they don\'t want to move their body actively.
>> My colleagues are getting old and they don\'t want to move their bodies actively.
They always want to do nothing and want to go home early.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> They often want to do nothing and want to go home early.
I agree that being active and doing group work is so much better in building teamwork.
In addition to that, being active will help you stay healthy and strong.
So keep doing it.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you tomorrow. ^_^
~Teacher C[이름]
In real life, there are so many serious problems that we have to face.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There are so many serious problems that we have to face in real life.
In this situation, I don\'t want to get an experience to be similar with real life\'s problem.
>> In this situation, I don\'t want to get an experience that is similar with real life\'s problems.
The purpose that I see the movie is to relax my mind and to forget some problems in a while.
>> The purpose why I see a movie is to relax my mind and to forget some problems in a while.
So, even if there are some problems in the action movies, they are not real things.
>> That\'s why, even if there are some problems in the action movies, they are not true.
Anyway, today was a teamwork day that is to make a good relationship with others.
>> Anyway, today was a teamwork day so it is a good way to make a good relationship with others.
There were some candidates for us to do today.
>> [Do you mean]: There were some things for us to do today.
We selected the favorite thing that we want to do.
>> We selected the favorite thing that we wanted to do.
The final selection that was gotten the highest score was to see the movie.
>> The final activity that was selected and got the highest score was to see a movie.
But I wonder that seeing the movie would be helpful or not.
>> But I wondered if seeing a movie would be helpful or not.
It\'s because there is no interaction with others.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s because it does not facilitate interaction with others.
So, I prefer an outdoor activity to seeing the movies.
>> So, I prefer an outdoor activity over seeing movies.
In the candidates. there were bowling game and riding a Segway.
>> Among the choices were a bowling game and riding a Segway.
My selection was to ride the Segway.
>> My choice was to ride the Segway.
My colleagues are getting old, they don\'t want to move their body actively.
>> My colleagues are getting old and they don\'t want to move their bodies actively.
They always want to do nothing and want to go home early.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> They often want to do nothing and want to go home early.
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