5/22 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If they have a chance to live together before getting married, it is okay.
But, I don\'t want to recommend it.
We face with unexpectable difficulties after getting married.
We find the husband\'s new personality and realize that we have a lot of problems to understand and match.
However, we know that it is not easy to give up and we have a responsibility to try to improve since marriage was my choice.
I think human have a proper regulation to control or regulate myself.
And one of that kind regulation is the registration of marriage.
If we didn\'t get married, we don\'t have any responsibility to overcome the situation.
We can give up the relationship anytime.
However, there is no one in this world who is 100% perfect for me.
We need to try and understand the other person as it is.
Although living together before marriage can help us decide whether or not to marry, I want to say that it is absolutely different from real married life.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thanks for this wonderful response to the homework you were given. I totally agree with you. Marriage is a complicated thing, so discovering each other\'s strengths and weaknesses can take a life time, and marriage can never be perfect. It has to be worked out.
-Rachel
If they have a chance to live together before getting married, it is okay. But, I don\'t want to recommend it.
>> correct
We face with unexpectable difficulties after getting married.
>> After getting married, we face unexpected difficulties.
We find the husband\'s new personality and realize that we have a lot of problems to understand and match.
We find the husband\'s new personality and realize that we have a lot of problems to understand and match.
>> We discover each other\'s new personality and realize that sometimes, we don\'t match each other.
However, we know that it is not easy to give up and we have a responsibility to try to improve since marriage was my choice.
However, we know that it is not easy to give up and we have a responsibility to try to improve since marriage was my choice.
>> correct
I think human have a proper regulation to control or regulate myself.
I think human have a proper regulation to control or regulate myself.
>> I think we can have a good system of regulating our selves.
And one of that kind regulation is the registration of marriage.
And one of that kind regulation is the registration of marriage.
>> correct (we just say, one kind if that regulation is the registration of marriage)
f we didn\'t get married, we don\'t have any responsibility to overcome the situation. We can give up the relationship anytime.
>> correct
However, there is no one in this world who is 100% perfect for me. We need to try and understand the other person as it is.
>> correct
Although living together before marriage can help us decide whether or not to marry, I want to say that it is absolutely different from real married life.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
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