5-22th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The fallen leaves make me be sensitive today.
Last night, the wind was serious so that many leaves fell down.
A lot of leaves were occupied all road so that there was no space for me to step.
It is still windy and it will rain in the afternoon.
When we step into the fallen leaves, it sounds very romantic.
I'm not sure about the title of poet, but in the poet "Could you listen to the sound of stepping the fallen leaves".
However, there is always another face.
After raining, the fallen leaves would be turned into a garbage.
If the wet leaves become dry, it would make a lot of dust in the air.
When they are crispy, if they were stepped by something or someone, they would be a lot of particles.
That's why it makes a lot of dust.
Even if it is very romantic, we have to sweep into a trash bin.
This season is famous for the maple in some trees.
The typical tree in Korea is a ginkgo.
If it become a fall, the color of ginkgo's leaves become yellow from green.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
It\'s Monday again!
How are you doing right now?
I honestly think that autumn is a beautiful season.
As someone who enjoys gardening, I think the fallen leaves can actually act as fertilizers when they rot.
It\'s just a thought. kkk.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher C[이름]
The fallen leaves make me be sensitive today.
>> The fallen leaves make me feel sensitive today.
Last night, the wind was serious so that many leaves fell down.
>> Last night, the wind was serious and many leaves fell down.
A lot of leaves were occupied all road so that there was no space for me to step.
>> Leaves covered the entire road so there was no space for me to step on.
It is still windy and it will rain in the afternoon.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s currently windy and it will rain in the afternoon.
When we step into the fallen leaves, it sounds very romantic.
>> When we step onto the fallen leaves, it sounds very romantic.
I\'m not sure about the title of poet, but in the poet \"Could you listen to the sound of stepping the fallen leaves\".
>> I\'m not sure about the title of the poem, but the poem says, \"Could you listen to the sound of the fallen leaves being stepped on?\".
However, there is always another face.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> However, there is always another perspective.
After raining, the fallen leaves would be turned into a garbage.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> After the rain, the fallen leaves turn go garbage.
If the wet leaves become dry, it would make a lot of dust in the air.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Once the wet leaves get dry, they create a lot of dust in the air.
When they are crispy, if they were stepped by something or someone, they would be a lot of particles.
>> When they are crispy and they are stepped on by something or someone, they would create a lot of particles.
That\'s why it makes a lot of dust.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That\'s why it creates a lot of dust.
Even if it is very romantic, we have to sweep into a trash bin.
>> Even if it is very romantic, we have to sweep them into a trash bin.
This season is famous for the maple in some trees.
>> This season is famous because of the maple trees.
The typical tree in Korea is a ginkgo.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The typical tree in Korea is called a ginkgo.
If it become a fall, the color of ginkgo\'s leaves become yellow from green.
>> When fall comes, the color of ginkgo\'s leaves become yellow from green.
It\'s Monday again!
How are you doing right now?
I honestly think that autumn is a beautiful season.
As someone who enjoys gardening, I think the fallen leaves can actually act as fertilizers when they rot.
It\'s just a thought. kkk.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you again tomorrow. ^^
~Teacher C[이름]
The fallen leaves make me be sensitive today.
>> The fallen leaves make me feel sensitive today.
Last night, the wind was serious so that many leaves fell down.
>> Last night, the wind was serious and many leaves fell down.
A lot of leaves were occupied all road so that there was no space for me to step.
>> Leaves covered the entire road so there was no space for me to step on.
It is still windy and it will rain in the afternoon.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s currently windy and it will rain in the afternoon.
When we step into the fallen leaves, it sounds very romantic.
>> When we step onto the fallen leaves, it sounds very romantic.
I\'m not sure about the title of poet, but in the poet \"Could you listen to the sound of stepping the fallen leaves\".
>> I\'m not sure about the title of the poem, but the poem says, \"Could you listen to the sound of the fallen leaves being stepped on?\".
However, there is always another face.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> However, there is always another perspective.
After raining, the fallen leaves would be turned into a garbage.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> After the rain, the fallen leaves turn go garbage.
If the wet leaves become dry, it would make a lot of dust in the air.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Once the wet leaves get dry, they create a lot of dust in the air.
When they are crispy, if they were stepped by something or someone, they would be a lot of particles.
>> When they are crispy and they are stepped on by something or someone, they would create a lot of particles.
That\'s why it makes a lot of dust.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That\'s why it creates a lot of dust.
Even if it is very romantic, we have to sweep into a trash bin.
>> Even if it is very romantic, we have to sweep them into a trash bin.
This season is famous for the maple in some trees.
>> This season is famous because of the maple trees.
The typical tree in Korea is a ginkgo.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The typical tree in Korea is called a ginkgo.
If it become a fall, the color of ginkgo\'s leaves become yellow from green.
>> When fall comes, the color of ginkgo\'s leaves become yellow from green.
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