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[What are the main differences between you and your closest friends that cause conflicts]
My closest friends is classmate when I was high school student.
>>> I met my closest friend in high school. As a matter of fact, she was my classmates.
At that time, we have almost same values for life.
>>> At that time, we had almost same values in life.
But, after became adult, our own values are separated naturally.
>>> But after we became adults, our own values changed naturally.
And now, we have different job.
>>> And now, we have different jobs.
It means we are living in different social environment.
>>> It means we are living in different social environments.
Particularly, the view of love is most conflict point between us.
>>> Particularly, our views on love are the biggest difference we have.
I already got married, but she didn\'t yet.
>>> Correct!
So actually I don\'t have any interesting about minor trouble between girl and boyfriend.
>>> So actually, I don\'t have any interest in minor troubles between lovers.
So, I can not consult her seriously.
>>> So, I can not advise her properly.
She always complain to me about these situation.
>>> She always complains to me about these situation.
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