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2018-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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[What are the main differences between you and your closest friends that cause conflicts] My closest friends is classmate when I was high school student. At that time, we have almost same values for life. But, after became adult, our own values are separated naturally. And now, we have different job. It means we are living in different social environment. Particularly, the view of love is most conflict point between us. I already got married, but she didn't yet. So actually I don't have any interesting about minor trouble between girl and boyfriend. So, I can not consult her seriously. She always complain to me about these situation.

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Hi there [이름]!

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~Teacher Shanee^^,


[What are the main differences between you and your closest friends that cause conflicts]

My closest friends is classmate when I was high school student. 

>>> I met my closest friend in high school. As a matter of fact, she was my classmates. 
 At that time, we have almost same values for life. 

>>> At that time, we had almost same values in life.
 But, after became adult, our own values are separated naturally. 

>>> But after we became adults, our own values changed naturally.
 And now, we have different job.

>>> And now, we have different jobs.
 It means we are living in different social environment.

>>> It means we are living in different social environments.
 Particularly, the view of love is most conflict point between us. 

>>> Particularly, our views on  love are the biggest difference we have.
 I already got married, but she didn\'t yet.

>>> Correct! 
 So actually I don\'t have any interesting about minor trouble between girl and boyfriend. 

>>> So actually, I don\'t have any interest in minor troubles between lovers.
 So, I can not consult her seriously.

>>> So, I can not advise her properly.
 She always complain to me about these situation.

>>> She always complains to me about these situation.





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