5.23 homework

2019-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. As a matter of fact 2. tackle 3. learning experience 4. inclined 5. people in all ages 1. As a mater of fact, It\'s good to go over the bills with a fine tooth comb because sometimes there are mistakes or duplicate charges. 2. I was determined to tackle problems which i am facing. I just want to wish to be solved well only. 3. We can also make sense of difficult concept through the learning experience. 4. The land incline steeply towards the shore that\'s why it looks nervous. However it is such a magnificent scenery. 5. People in all ages like that bakery. This bakery is famous for a top pick in my area. I heard so much that i decided to pay a visit.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework. I hope you study the corrections carefully. 


 


Cheers!

Jean




1. As a matter of fact
2. tackle 
3. learning experience 
4. inclined 
5. people in all ages 

1. As a mater of fact, It\'s good to go over the bills with a fine tooth comb because sometimes there are mistakes or duplicate charges.
>> CORRECT~~

2. I was determined to tackle problems which i am facing. I just want to wish to be solved well only.
>> I was determined to tackle problems, which I am facing. I just want to solve them well.  

3. We can also make sense of difficult concept through the learning experience.
>> We can also make sense of difficult concepts through learning experience. 

4. The land incline steeply towards the shore that\'s why it looks nervous. However it is such a magnificent scenery.
>> The land incline steeply towards the shore that\'s why I feel nervous looking at it. However, it is such a magnificent scenery. 

5. People in all ages like that bakery. This bakery is famous for a top pick in my area. I heard so much that i decided to pay a visit.
>> People in all ages like that bakery. This bakery is famous for its being a top pick in my area. I heard so much about it that I decided to pay the place a visit. 

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