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We had playing hide and seek.
This is so funny and my younger brother\'s one of favorite plays.
Beside me and my older brother\'s my favorite play were hide and seek when we were young.
We had a excited time together during it.
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Hey, [이름] [이름]!
Sibling relationships are emotionally powerful and critically important not only in childhood but over the course of a lifetime. Siblings form a child\'s first peer group, and children learn social skills, particularly in managing conflict, from negotiating with brothers and sisters. It\'s nice to hear that you have good relationship with your brothers. ^^
- Kristine ^^
We had playing hide and seek.
>> We had a lot of fun playing hide and seek.
This is so funny and my younger brother\'s one of favorite plays.
This is so funny and my younger brother\'s one of favorite plays.
>> This is hilarious, and it\'s one of my younger brother\'s favorite games.
Beside me and my older brother\'s my favorite play were hide and seek when we were young.
Beside me and my older brother\'s my favorite play were hide and seek when we were young.
>> When I was little, my favorite game was hide and seek with my elder brother.
We had a excited time together during it.
We had a excited time together during it.
>> We had a great time together.
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