5/25 homework
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Q: What is one thing you would really like to own?
A: Greenery garden.
I wish getting my own garden. I went to my grandma's house last weekend. her house is surrounded by nature like little mountain, grass.
I began to think whenever see this landscape, I also want to get my own green world. So if I earn money as I can, I must get garden.
강사 첨삭
Won,
I guess you\'ve got time today. I hope to hear your voice later. See ya!
I wish getting my own garden.
>> I wish to have my own garden.
I went to my grandma\'s house last weekend.
>> correct!
Her house is surrounded by nature like little mountain, grass.
>> Her house is surrounded by nature like a hill, grasses and other plants.
I began to think whenever see this landscape, I also want to get my own green world.
>> I started thinking of getting/having my own garden when I saw that landscape.
So if I earn money as I can, I must get garden.
>> So if I earn enough, I must have a garden.
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