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I think they\'ll not interest in my past research.
They want to know what can I do and what I will do there.
So, I think I have to take time mainly for future plans.
I read the purpose and vision of the department, and I will prepare my presentation with the scopes.
I\'ll present my research plan and emphasize the research that can collaborate with the professors in the department to be the improved research.
In addition, I have several lecture careers, and I got first place in my lecture evaluation twice at the college of engineering.
I believe that I understood the student\'s needs and education level and I showed my education passion to them.
I want to emphasize it to demonstrate that I can educate students well, but I don\'t want to brag.
And I got the government research budget a few days ago.
They don\'t know about it because the results were not announced when I applied.
Therefore, I want to explain about the information additionally.
Above all, I\'ll present with a confident attitude
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
If I were the HR department, I would have hired you already. I do not say this to flatter you, but I know that your work is valuable and that you don\'t put much effort if you are not serious with it, so that is how much important you research is for you. I just hope that the professors in the university will see your passion and allow you to be part of their faculty.
-Rachel
I think they\'ll not interest in my past research.
>> I think they\'ll have no interest in my past research.
They want to know what can I do and what I will do there.
They want to know what can I do and what I will do there.
>> correct
So, I think I have to take time mainly for future plans.
So, I think I have to take time mainly for future plans.
>> correct
I read the purpose and vision of the department, and I will prepare my presentation with the scopes.
I read the purpose and vision of the department, and I will prepare my presentation with the scopes.
>> correct
I\'ll present my research plan and emphasize the research that can collaborate with the professors in the department to be the improved research.
I\'ll present my research plan and emphasize the research that can collaborate with the professors in the department to be the improved research.
>> I\'ll present my research plan and emphasize on the project that I can collaborate with the professors to improve the research.
In addition, I have several lecture careers, and I got first place in my lecture evaluation twice at the college of engineering.
In addition, I have several lecture careers, and I got first place in my lecture evaluation twice at the college of engineering.
>> correct
I believe that I understood the student\'s needs and education level and I showed my education passion to them.
I believe that I understood the student\'s needs and education level and I showed my education passion to them.
>> correct (we just say, and I just showed my passion for teaching to them)
I want to emphasize it to demonstrate that I can educate students well, but I don\'t want to brag.
I want to emphasize it to demonstrate that I can educate students well, but I don\'t want to brag.
>> correct
And I got the government research budget a few days ago.
And I got the government research budget a few days ago.
>> correct
They don\'t know about it because the results were not announced when I applied.
They don\'t know about it because the results were not announced when I applied.
>> correct
Therefore, I want to explain about the information additionally. Above all, I\'ll present with a confident attitude
Therefore, I want to explain about the information additionally. Above all, I\'ll present with a confident attitude
>> correct
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