5.26 Homework

2014-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi ma'am! Good morning! Are fathers capable of carring out the duties of a mother? By nature, the father is strong and the mother is soft. The mother can take care of kids more delicate. In order to carry out the duties of the other side, they need to take a lot of efforts. Consequentially, I think fathers are uncapable of carring out the duties of a mother. It has a strong influence that formation of one's personality. Thank you! Byebye!

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Mr. [이름]! I hope that you are having a good Monday. Anway, kindly check some of my corrections please. Have a nice day! ~KeLLy~ Hi ma\'am! Good morning!>> Correct.Are fathers capable of carring out the duties of a mother?By nature, the father is strong and the mother is soft. >> By nature, fathers have a strong personality while mothers are usually soft. The mother can take care of kids more delicate. >> A mother can take care of kids more delicately. In order to carry out the duties of the other side, they need to take a lot of efforts. >> On the other hand, in order to carry out their duties, they need to take a ot of efforts. Consequentially, I think fathers are uncapable of carring out the duties of a mother. >> Consequentially, I think fathers are uncapable of caryng out the duties of a mother. It has a strong influence that formation of one\'s personality.>> It needs a strong influence in order to form a person\'s personality.Thank you! Byebye! >> Correct.

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