5-26th Homework

The earthquake is not predictable for human like a misfortune. We cannot protect some dangers from the misfortune because we are not a god. In Korea, the strong earthquake happened yesterday and I felt the shake too. Actually, the entrance examination for universities had been scheduled today. But there are many serious buildings in the city where it occurred. So, the examination was rescheduled to the same day of the next week. It was to keep the valance and fair of the examination over all nationwide. I didn't always feel the shake but at this time the shake was very strong. At that time, I was in an office. My phone suddenly alarmed to me with the strange sound. It was a notice that it happened the earthquake in Korea and all had to be careful. The speed of the notice was same with that of the earthquake. In last earthquake, the notice lately arrived. Several aftershocks would be occurred like last earthquake. And the aftershocks were already occurred, it was about 40 times.

Hi, [이름]! :)
Thank you for doing your best to update me about the latest events in Korea. 
I think earthquakes, no matter how weak or strong they are, are always terrifying. 
Please be careful all the time and always take the necessary precautions. 
I hope you\'re all doing okay. 
See you again tomorrow.
~Teacher C[이름] 
The earthquake is not predictable for human like a misfortune.
>> The earthquake is not predictable for humans and it\'s like a misfortune.
We cannot protect some dangers from the misfortune because we are not a god.
>> We cannot protect ourselves from some dangers and misfortunes because we are not a god.
In Korea, the strong earthquake happened yesterday and I felt the shake too.
>> In Korea, the strong earthquake happened yesterday and I felt the shaking too.
Actually, the entrance examination for universities had been scheduled today.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Actually, the entrance examination for universities was scheduled today.
But there are many serious buildings in the city where it occurred.
>> [Do you mean]: But there are many buildings in the city that were seriously affected.
So, the examination was rescheduled to the same day of the next week.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> So, the examination was rescheduled to the same day of the following week.
It was to keep the valance and fair of the examination over all nationwide.
>> This is to keep the balance and maintain a fair examination to all students nationwide.
I didn\'t always feel the shake but at this time the shake was very strong.
>> I didn\'t always feel the shaking in the past but this time, the shaking was very strong.
At that time, I was in an office.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I was in an office at that time.
My phone suddenly alarmed to me with the strange sound.
>> My phone suddenly alarmed and to me, it was a strange sound.
It was a notice that it happened the earthquake in Korea and all had to be careful.
>> It was a notice that an earthquake was happening in Korea and all had to be careful.
The speed of the notice was same with that of the earthquake.
>> The speed of the notice was the same with that of the earthquake.
In last earthquake, the notice lately arrived.
>> In the earthquake before that, the notice arrived late. 
Several aftershocks would be occurred like last earthquake.
>> Several aftershocks would occur like in the last earthquake.
And the aftershocks were already occurred, it was about 40 times.
>> The aftershocks already occurred and it was about 40 times.Correction