5.27 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning! The weather is very nice to play golf today. I wish I were going out to the suburbs now.
If you could stop time,what would you do and why?
If I could stop time, I would like to study English until I can speak English fluently.
And I would like to make enough money as much as I can spend any time.And then I want to sleep all the week without thinking about anything.
Thank you! Have a great day!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sending your homework. Have a good day! Please review my corrections for todays homework.
~KeLLy~
Hi ma\'am! Good morning!
>> Correct.
The weather is very nice to play golf today.
>> The weather is very nice and conducive for playing golf.
I wish I were going out to the suburbs now.>> I wish I could go to the suburb now.If you could stop time,what would you do and why?If I could stop time, I would like to study English until I can speak English fluently.
>> If I could stop the time, I would like to study English until I become fluent.And I would like to make enough money as much as I can spend any time.
>> And I would like to make enough money as much as I could so I can spend any time.
And then I want to sleep all the week without thinking about anything.>> And I want to sleep all week without thinking about anything.Thank you! Have a great day!
>> Correct.
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